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The Rejected Leaf

Half a working-diagram in a cold, exquisite maker's hand, found where such things wash down from the high wastes — a design for a living thing, annotated like a smith annotates a casting, with a row of small crossed-out figures down the margin under one flat word: rejected.

[a single stiff leaf, drawn in silver-point in a hand too precise to be human; the language is Vyr technical shorthand, only partly renderable] [top: a figure — clearly meant to walk, to grasp, to be a PERSON — laid out in construction lines like a thing to be built, with load-paths and joins marked, and beside the head, in a maker's aside:] carriage acceptable. intent does not seat. begins the work and cannot finish it — see prior. the knack is not in the diagram. [down the margin, a column of smaller figures, each struck through with one clean line, each labeled:] draft — rejected. draft — rejected. draft — voided, released downslope, do not recover. draft — rejected. draft — carriage failed, limbs sound, released. [at the foot, alone, not struck through, the one line left unfinished exactly as a certain child draws it:] the fair copy will seat what these could not. continue. [nothing else — no name, no date, no plea; only the cold patience of someone doing careful work on a thing that keeps coming out wrong, and setting the wrong ones loose downhill]

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